2013年5月26日 星期日

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No More Weird Things When Buying Online

Online Shopping
  Online shopping is a new trend nowadays. Clothes, purses, even some rare video games that we can buy it online. It seems that you can get everything you need on the internet. But, does it really satisfy what customers’ needs?
  There are three female interviewees, Ting-Ni Chen, Lulu Lin who are NCU’s students and Shih-Ting Chang, NTNU’s student that they have experienced buying online. The main items what they buy online mostly are clothes, bags and shoes.
 “I shop online nearly once in a month” says Ms. Lin, a NCU’s student, “Because online shopping is convenient and NCU is so remote that I don’t have motorcycle that can stroll around the streets and shopping.”


Online Shopping






 
 
  Convenience is one of advantages for buying on the internet. And another is that online markets offer extraordinary products.
  “I have bought shoe-pads on the internet” says Ms. Chang, who is NTNU’s student, “Shoe-pads are not easy to buy in common shopping mall.”
  The other two male interviewees, Mr. Chen and Mr. Lyu, both of whom are NCU’s students, say that they have bought dumbbell, facial mask, ice packing and underpants on the internet but seldom buy them in physical shops.
  “Because it’s too shy for me to buy underpants in common stores,” says Mr. Lyu, “And also shopping online will be cheaper than buying in the physical stores.”
  Online market is not only creating the new direction but also contenting personal interests of shopping.


2013年5月21日 星期二

The New Way Of Shopping: Online Shopping (draft 2)

The Online Shopping


     Online shopping is a new trend nowadays. There are three female interviewees, Ting-Ni Chen, Lulu Lin and Shih-Ting Chang who are NCU’s students and NTNU’s student that have experienced buying online. The main items what they buy online mostly are clothes, bags and shoes.
    “I’m almost shopping online once a month at least,” says Ms. Lin, who is NCU’s student, “Because online shopping is convenient and the NCU is so remote that I don’t have motorcycle can stroll around the streets and shopping.”
    Convenient is one of advantages for buying on the internet. In addition, there is another advantage that online markets offer extraordinary products. “I have bought shoe-pads on the internet” says Ms. Chang, who is NTNU’s student, “Shoe-pads are not easy to buy in common shopping mall.”
The other two male interviewees, Mr. Chen and Mr. Lyu who both are NCU’s students, say that they have bought dumbbell, facial mask, ice packing and underpants on the internet but seldom buy them in physical shops.
The Online Shopping
“Because it’s too shy for me to buy in common stores, “says Mr. Lyu, “And also shopping online will be cheaper than buying in the physical stores.”
     Though online shopping has many risks that most of people have deceived on the internet, such negative influences of online shopping seem not affect the customers’ interests. “I think if we know more information about buyers or the platforms on the internet,” says Ms. Chang, “Then we will not be cheated and can lower the risk for online shopping.”   

2013年5月7日 星期二

The New Way Of Shopping: Online Shopping

The Online Shopping

  Online shopping is a new trend nowadays. Almost everyone has experienced buying online. There are three female interviewees, Ting-Ni Chen, Lulu Lin and Shih-Ting Chang who are NCU’s students and NTNU’s student. 
  They all show the main items which they buy online are clothes, bags and shoes. “I’m almost shopping online once a month at least,” says Ms. Lin, who is NCU’s student, “Because online shopping is convenient and the NCU is so remote so that I don’t have motorcycle can stroll around the streets and shopping.”
  Convenient is one of advantages for buying on the internet. In addition, there is another advantage that online products are full of extraordinary things. 
  “I have bought shoe-pads on the internet” says Ms. Chang, who is NTNU’s student,“ Shoe-pads are not easy to buy in common shopping mall.” 
  The other two male interviewees, Mr. Chen and Mr. Lyu who both are NCU’s students, say that they have bought dumbbell, facial mask, ice packing and underpants on the internet but seldom buy them in physical shops. “Because it’s too shy for me to buy in common stores, “says Mr. Lyu, “And also shopping online will be cheaper than buying in the physical stores.”
The Online Shopping
  Though online shopping has many risks that most of people have deceived on the internet, such negative influences of online shopping seem not affect the customers’ interests.
   “I think if we know more information about buyers or the platforms on the internet,” says Ms. Chang, “Then we will not be cheated and can lower the risk for online shopping.”