(1) The Third & Forth paragraph is not coherent
(2) Speakinf of "Global Famine" in last paragraph is so abrupt
(3) The ending of news should be modified.
(4) The survey which I conducted should put the date and title ( also group) precisely.
(5) The pictures and other informations that I pose it in my blogger is clear.
(6) The news should put emphasize on my viewpoint.
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