Notes about group News (2)

Our group finally decided our news after long discussion that we have many problems and difficulties during our discussion. Our New topic is  The conflict between Taiwan and Philippines—Why Taiwanese are so angry?

The news is growing more and more intense and attracts many people to comment on the web and also the concerning topics are broad. So we want to know what people are thinking about this issue?  

The way how we conduct our plan is that we will choose a video—2 Minutes, One Fact—What Philippine Government did and Said to Taiwan—on YouTube that was uploaded on 5/16, 2013.And then we will analyze the comments under the video and post our comments to see if there are any responds.

                 In the previous class succession which is on June 5^th, we draw a poster to write down our way and purpose about how to do our news. And then teacher played “merry-go-around” to let other groups’ members go to another groups and there is two original group members staying in their original group to explain to them what their news topics and the way how they do their news. After explanations, there are two to three minutes to listeners ask questions to whom explain their mews to them.

It’s quite interesting way that I have never seen before. This way is not only can practice our oral speaking, but also can train our abilities to respond and communicate others in short time by using English. It is quite useful but also easy way to let us learn more skills in oral speaking.   

Note Of Group Project

The topic of our group project is that we want to analyze the comments which are about the recent event: The conflict of ship between Philippines and Taiwan.

  The motivation that we want to do this topic it’s because we found there are so many different viewpoints about this issue on the e-paper. In addition, there are from a large number of different countries’ Internet users who expressed their opinions on the Internet. So, we want to analyze the comments what they left on the Internet.

  The way how we do this project is that we will divide four different thoughts (according to the messages which are left in the e-papers) about the news. And then we will base on this messages to ask interviewees how their feelings and thoughts about each viewpoints. After interviewing, we will make the video to record the reactions of each interviewee and write down our reflections in our interviews.

  As for the questions which we ask will select the messages on e-papers that I have mentioned in previous paragraphs, so that we will opt four different comments which are from different four countries’ Internet users who left the massages on the internet.

  I think it will be an interesting topic that through the interviews, we can know how general people think about this event in different thoughts. But, there are some problems that we are worry about that it may have radical views which involve in racial or historical complex to Philippines or Taiwan.

The New Way Of Shopping: Online Shopping (2.4)

  Online shopping is a new trend nowadays. We can buy  everything online: Clothes, purses, even some rare video games and so on. Bur does online shopping really satisfy customers' needs?
  Thng-Ni Chen and Lulu Line, who are NCU's students, and Shih-Ting Chang, NTNU's student, all have experienced shopping online. The items that they buy online are clothes, bags and shoes.
  " I shop online nearly once in a month, because online shopping is convenient." says Ms. Lin, a NCU's student, " NCU is so remote and I don't have a motorcycle to stroll around the streets and shopping."
  Convenience is one of advantages for shopping on the internet. Online markets also offer extraordinary products.
  " I have bought shoe-pads on the internet" says Ms. Chang, who is NTNU's student, "Shoe-pads are not easy to buy in a common shopping mall."
  The other two male interviewees, Mr. Chen and Mr. Lyu, both of whom are NCU's students, says that they have bought a dumbell, a packor facial mask, ice packing and underpants on the internet but seldom buy them in physical shops.
  "Because it's too shy for me to buy underpants in common stores," says Mr. Lyu, "And salso shopping online will be cheaper than buying in the physical stores."
  The online market is not only creating the new direction but also contenting personal interests of shopping. 

Peers' Comments

Interesting lead / Headline / Summary	X		O			X
Who / When / What / Where / How	O	O/X		O	X		O/X
其他調查資源(圖片、連結、影片等)	2 pictures
特殊的觀點(angle)	X
文章張力	X/O
humorous ending	X
內容有趣度﹝程度評分1-5﹞	3~4

(1) Title should be changed
(2) No interesting Leading (Leading should be modified)
(3) Lacking of personal viewpoint
(4)Adding more pictures or recordings of  interviewees will be great
(5)Having coversation is good!

No More Weird Things When Buying Online

Online Shopping

  Online shopping is a new trend nowadays. Clothes, purses, even some rare video games that we can buy it online. It seems that you can get everything you need on the internet. But, does it really satisfy what customers’ needs?

  There are three female interviewees, Ting-Ni Chen, Lulu Lin who are NCU’s students and Shih-Ting Chang, NTNU’s student that they have experienced buying online. The main items what they buy online mostly are clothes, bags and shoes.

 “I shop online nearly once in a month” says Ms. Lin, a NCU’s student, “Because online shopping is convenient and NCU is so remote that I don’t have motorcycle that can stroll around the streets and shopping.”




Online Shopping

 

 
  Convenience is one of advantages for buying on the internet. And another is that online markets offer extraordinary products.
  “I have bought shoe-pads on the internet” says Ms. Chang, who is NTNU’s student, “Shoe-pads are not easy to buy in common shopping mall.”

  The other two male interviewees, Mr. Chen and Mr. Lyu, both of whom are NCU’s students, say that they have bought dumbbell, facial mask, ice packing and underpants on the internet but seldom buy them in physical shops.

  “Because it’s too shy for me to buy underpants in common stores,” says Mr. Lyu, “And also shopping online will be cheaper than buying in the physical stores.”

  Online market is not only creating the new direction but also contenting personal interests of shopping.

The New Way Of Shopping: Online Shopping (draft 2)

The Online Shopping

     Online shopping is a new trend nowadays. There are three female interviewees, Ting-Ni Chen, Lulu Lin and Shih-Ting Chang who are NCU’s students and NTNU’s student that have experienced buying online. The main items what they buy online mostly are clothes, bags and shoes.

    “I’m almost shopping online once a month at least,” says Ms. Lin, who is NCU’s student, “Because online shopping is convenient and the NCU is so remote that I don’t have motorcycle can stroll around the streets and shopping.”

    Convenient is one of advantages for buying on the internet. In addition, there is another advantage that online markets offer extraordinary products. “I have bought shoe-pads on the internet” says Ms. Chang, who is NTNU’s student, “Shoe-pads are not easy to buy in common shopping mall.”

The other two male interviewees, Mr. Chen and Mr. Lyu who both are NCU’s students, say that they have bought dumbbell, facial mask, ice packing and underpants on the internet but seldom buy them in physical shops.

The Online Shopping

“Because it’s too shy for me to buy in common stores, “says Mr. Lyu, “And also shopping online will be cheaper than buying in the physical stores.”

     Though online shopping has many risks that most of people have deceived on the internet, such negative influences of online shopping seem not affect the customers’ interests. “I think if we know more information about buyers or the platforms on the internet,” says Ms. Chang, “Then we will not be cheated and can lower the risk for online shopping.”   

The New Way Of Shopping: Online Shopping

The Online Shopping

  Online shopping is a new trend nowadays. Almost everyone has experienced buying online. There are three female interviewees, Ting-Ni Chen, Lulu Lin and Shih-Ting Chang who are NCU’s students and NTNU’s student. 

  They all show the main items which they buy online are clothes, bags and shoes. “I’m almost shopping online once a month at least,” says Ms. Lin, who is NCU’s student, “Because online shopping is convenient and the NCU is so remote so that I don’t have motorcycle can stroll around the streets and shopping.”

  Convenient is one of advantages for buying on the internet. In addition, there is another advantage that online products are full of extraordinary things. 

  “I have bought shoe-pads on the internet” says Ms. Chang, who is NTNU’s student,“ Shoe-pads are not easy to buy in common shopping mall.” 

  The other two male interviewees, Mr. Chen and Mr. Lyu who both are NCU’s students, say that they have bought dumbbell, facial mask, ice packing and underpants on the internet but seldom buy them in physical shops. “Because it’s too shy for me to buy in common stores, “says Mr. Lyu, “And also shopping online will be cheaper than buying in the physical stores.”

The Online Shopping

  Though online shopping has many risks that most of people have deceived on the internet, such negative influences of online shopping seem not affect the customers’ interests.

   “I think if we know more information about buyers or the platforms on the internet,” says Ms. Chang, “Then we will not be cheated and can lower the risk for online shopping.”   

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Comments

(1) The Third & Forth paragraph is not coherent

(2) Speakinf of "Global Famine" in last paragraph is so abrupt

(3) The ending of news should be modified.

(4) The survey which I conducted should put the date and title ( also group) precisely.

(5) The pictures and other informations  that I pose it in my blogger is clear.

(6) The news should put emphasize  on my viewpoint.

All You Can Eat Restaurant-Various Delicacies, Various Problems. (Final)

In recent years, all-you-can-eat restaurants have gradually become more popular no matter in Taiwan or abroad. The reason why it has become famous is because the customers can use lower price to satisfy their desires for good food. However, does it really benefit for our health and our society?

     According to my survey: All-You-Can-Eat Restaurant and Our Life , which began from 2013.03.11.It shows 78.16％ responders thinking we often eat too much food that overtakes we can afford. In addition, there are more than 79.88％ people think it is waste that the food has not been eaten. So, we can find though 77.01％ people think it can offer multiple food to customers, but most responders think it may bring some problems and negative influences to our health and society.
      Based on the news of Merit Times mention: some legislators have advocated not using the slogan ”All you can eat” in the advertisement, and also the doctor declares if we eat too much may cause over nutrition that we will have some diseases like high blood pressure or hyperglycemia.
      Aside from this, the issue—global famine is recently concerned by the masses. Thus, the dishes we left may cause a big imbalance between supply and demand for food. Therefore, shall we make the impression of waste while most people are under -nourished?

All You Can Eat Restaurant-Various Delicacies, Various Problems



Various dishes provide for customers to choose



In recent years, all-you-can-eat restaurants have gradually become more popular no matter in Taiwan or abroad. The reason why it has become famous is because the customers can use lower price to satisfy their desires for good food. However, does it really benefit for our health and our society?


All-You-Can-Eat Buffet



      According to my survey , there are 78.16％ responders think we often eat too much food that overtakes we can afford. In addition, there are more than 79.88％ people think it is waste that the food has not been eaten. So, we can find though 77.01％ people think it can offer multiple food to customers, but most responders think it may bring some problems and negative influences to our health and society.

      In the past few years, some legislators have advocated not using the slogan ”All you can eat” in the advertisement, and they also suggest the government to correct our thoughts and modify the erring notion about the diet to next generations. Moreover, the doctor also declares if we eat too much may cause over nutrition that we will have some diseases like high blood pressure or hyperglycemia.
          Aside from this, the climate change has recently led to global famine. Thus, the dishes we left may cause a big imbalance between supply and demand for food. Therefore, as one of world civil, should we have just filled up our bellies rather than care about the future of our health and world?  

the chart of my survey:

Links of the pictures:

http://www.gastronomieguide.de/blog/restaurant-erteilt-vielfraessigen-stammgaesten-hausverbot/

http://wikiality.wikia.com/All-You-Can-Eat_Buffet

All You Can Eat Restaurant-Various Delicacies, Various Problems



Various dishes provide for customers to choose



In recent years, all-you-can-eat restaurants have gradually become more popular, so that we can see it everywhere no matter in Taiwan or abroad. The reason why it has become famous is because the customers can use lower price to satisfy their desires for good food. However, it sounds very flawless that we can have a variety of dishes when we have already paid for it, but, does it really benefit for our health and our society?



All-You-Can-Eat Buffet - 
Wikiality, the Truthiness Encyclopedia



According to my survey , there are 78％ people think we often eat too much food that overtakes we can afford it when we go to all-you-can-eat restaurant. In addition, there are more than 78％ people think it is waste that the food has not been eaten. So, we can find though 76％ people think it can offer multiple food to customers, but most people think it may bring some problems and negative influences to our health. In the past few years, some legislators have proposed to do not use the slogan ”All you can eat” in the advertisement, and they also suggest the government to correct our thoughts and teach our children to modify the deviation notion about the diet. Moreover, the doctor also declares if we eat too much may cause over nutrition that we will have some disease like high blood pressure or hyperglycemia. Aside from this, the climate change has led to global famine in recent years. Thus, it resulted in a big imbalance between supply and demand for food. Therefore, we all the one of world civil, should we have just filled up our belly rather than care about the future of our health and society?   

the chart of my survey:

Links of the picture:
http://www.gastronomieguide.de/blog/restaurant-erteilt-vielfraessigen-stammgaesten-hausverbot/
http://wikiality.wikia.com/All-You-Can-Eat_Buffet

The Information About All You Can Eat Restaurant

BBC News:Rise of the all-you-can-eat restaurant

All you can eat restaurants:Great Deal or Bad Policy?

吃到飽廣告，立法委員擬立法禁止

All You Can Eat Restaurant

搶救全球糧荒 專家:減少浪費

The survey of All You Can Eat Restaurant~

The survey of All You Can Eat Restaurant

Introduction

My name is Jessica. I am studying at National  Central University of English Department in Taiwan.  I love to listen to the music and watch some romantic movies or Korean drama on the weekends. In addition, jogging is one of my favorite activities on hoildays. I like to jogging on Saturday morning with my family.It's a good way to relieve my pressure of schoolwork. Sometimes, I like to read some novels to improve my writing skills of literature. There is a dream that I want to travel around the world, so that I wish I can learn English well and interact with other foreigners to learn different cultures and widen my horizon. In the end, there are my members in journalistic Writing course: 賴薇安(Vivien Lai) ,林依(Yi Lin),余姿瑩.